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Saying It Out Loud

Saying It Out Loud

I wish you could

read it all,

in my death-stare

into your soul,

than, force me to sully,

my tongue and my spirit,

into uttering the undeniable.

You pushed me to my limits.

Now, I besmirched the wall

with my own blood,

I am naked in my clothes,

my soul leaving in penitence,

regretted existence!

While, you walked away

with nary a drop of sweat.

I wish they could

read it all,

in our death-stare

into their souls.

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9 responses to “Saying It Out Loud”

  1. Srisanthi Avatar
    Srisanthi

    awesome expression of the emotion, I could connect so well with it.

    way to go!! Sukanya, you have that spark!

    1. Sukanya S Avatar
      Sukanya S

      Thanks Santhi for taking the time to read and comment. Thank you for your kind and motivating words.

  2. Naveen S Avatar
    Naveen S

    Raw n powerful.. keep going dear 👍

    1. Sukanya S Avatar
      Sukanya S

      Thanks ettan

  3. Neha Baweja Avatar
    Neha Baweja

    penned so well… relatable…great going Sukanya

    1. Sukanya S Avatar
      Sukanya S

      Thank you, Neha.

  4. Rintu George Avatar
    Rintu George

    I loved the stark contrast of being naked with clothes..it gives such depth to your verse.

    Good going Sukanya!

  5. Padmajan TK Avatar
    Padmajan TK

    Sukanya You have excellent flair, Please pen your thoughts very often 👍

  6. Sukanya S Avatar
    Sukanya S

    Thank you ma’am. I am glad that you enjoyed it.

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